Hanna

[Lorey]

Thank you for viewing.

[Marko]

I like this but it's missing something imo...I think it's intensity/emotion/joy of playing that's missing, or perhaps simple eye contact.
I dig the processing and overall comp though.

[Lorey]

Thank you Marko. I agree with you about what's missing. She wasn't a very emotional player and when doing the shooting I kept waiting for a good deeply concentrated look but it never did come. I appreciate you viewing and commenting.

[Marko]

My pleasure - It's tough to do at the beginning but try not waiting when the model isn't giving you what you need.
Try actively directing the model as you have done in other recent shoots .