This is a discussion on Downtown Indianapolis within the People photography (portraits, sports etc.) forums, part of the Show your photo (Color) - Landscape & Nature (flowers, mountains, storms etc.) category; I spent this week at the Public Library Association Conference. I made sure I made a little bit of time ...
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I really like all that is going on in this - there is a lot but it works well together.
As you have invited critique.....and I know it is partially perspective, but too me the image seems to tilt slightly to the right.
The light has been handled well and the framing is clever and works IMO.
Nice image JAson
Thanks, RM. That bothered me too. I think what is going on is that the monument on the right hand side angles in that direction. I keep going back to the capital building in the background and it seems straight to me. Still, I find the perceived tilt distracting too. Thanks for the feedback!
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Cool image with lots going on. I agree about the tilt though, the whole image Except for left edge) slopes right. Doesn't seem like too difficult a fix.
Left third and bottom third look about 10-20% too dark to my eye.
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Thanks, guys. I'll have to go back and give it a little tilt to the left! I appreciate the feedback!
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