Through My Eyes

[bec.schouest89]

No, this is my bestfriend.

[Mad Aussie]

Wish MY best friend was that pretty! You are lucky to have someone so photographic to practice your portraiture on.

I don't think there's much I can add here other to say the composition is very good. About the only niggle there is I'd rather not see the green grass sneaking into the top of the shot.
Not being sure of what you did in the post processing it's kind of hard to be specific about improvements. If you feel like it, throw up the original so we can see what you started with. We might be able to make stronger suggestions on the camera settings etc from that.

Things I'd have liked to see are the eyes a little brighter and the shadows a little less black. Using something as reflector can help with that.