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This is a discussion on Final version within the General photography forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; The image is finally done for my dads work. This is the final product unless they want another group picture. ...

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    The image is finally done for my dads work. This is the final product unless they want another group picture. It is really needed, but getting everyone together is a tough thing to do since they are all on different schedules. Its not exactly professional material, but I learned quite a bit trying to do this. Thanks to Pete(Kat's hubby) and MA for some quality input and advice. The pictures for the calender are going to be picked out by the guys working there. They are not very good images but to them they are awesome which is all that matters. The calender does not mean as much to them as this picture so I might put the calender on hold until I can get some quality images. Its hard because in the transport business, things are kind of hectic around there and they don't have much time to stop and get their picture taken, or they just dont want me to take their picture. In the end, it turned out to be a good experience. Got a wedding out of it, and will probably have to do this for the Detroit Division as well. Thanks everyone!
    (hopefully the lighting there is a little better)

    Kat - I think I owe Pete a little bit for his ideas haha
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    BIG improvement. I like the layout of this one; I'd like to see something a little more creative with the title text though; maybe in the "Jeep" font?


    Oh, and BTW, if it's not made by Willys-Overland, it's NOT a Jeep!

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    Yeah I wanted to get a little more creative with the text myself but sometimes simple is better. It was hard figuring out what I wanted to do with it. As far as the Willys-Overland, carried over into the Jeep pretty well. Some even say its the reason WWII ended. I have my own opinions about that. Whats even funnier is the same goes for the Hummer. As much as I hate that vehicle now, its originally a Jeep/Willys design.
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