From a path overlooking the reservoir. Comments/critique appreciated. Mike
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From a path overlooking the reservoir. Comments/critique appreciated. Mike
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I'd convert it to monochrome .... and see what happens.
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Thanks for the suggestion. So many choices. How about this: I like the highlighted sail and the contrasting shadow . The water isn't too blown out.
Mike
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works wonders for me ... big improvement IMHO
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Retaining a bit of detail on the two boys might add some interest to the mono version.
Overall the composition and clarity are great in both shots. The first has a distinct yellow cast though.
Matt I agree, it is better in Black and white. MA, I see what you mean about the sailors remaining in detail. Thanks for the comments.
Mike
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