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    what do you think of moths?


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    I'm surprised at the shallow depth of field you have achieved here at 55mm F8 the out of focus area is an interesting colour.... where did you shoot this?

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    the shot is underexposed.. a little fill flash would help with the shadows and show more detail on the moth

    the focal point is longer the lower wing and generally speaking you want the focal point to be the head of the insect

    keep at it...
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    I think that this shot would also benefit from increased contrast.

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