The board slipped out of frame a little bit but i think it turned out pretty well
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The board slipped out of frame a little bit but i think it turned out pretty well
i don't think that the board slipping out of the frame is a huge problem, but it did seem as though there was a fair amount of camera noise in the sky
Nope, agree, there's nothing wrong with the board (or anything else) in the composition of this image. What is bothering me however is the skin tones. I suspect that your white balance is set just a little too warm. I recommend double-checking that and maybe doing some test shots on a person in bright sun just to tweak it a little; his skin is almost bright red/orange in spots.
All that aside, REALLY good capture!
thank you!
these were taken with film by the way
this shot i had processed directly to cd, i did do a small amount of cropping to remove the top of some kids head at the bottom, other than that no
Sometimes saving as a jpeg will introduce stuff that's not in the original file.
This is a fantastic capture!
Skin is a bit red - but that's it and it's easily corrected.
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Looks good to me...
If I were to nit pick I would rather have the whole board in.... and the top of the tree out... but the shot is still strong....
IMO I don't really see a skin problem... it's most likely red because he's been in the sun skateboarding all day with a 120bpm heart rate... but... the posters mentioning it are much more senior in photography than me so you may want to pay attention to it...
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i like the tree top in this shot, for me it adds height!
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