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Another beach photo

This is a discussion on Another beach photo within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; This one was of the steps that took you to the beach. I will probably make the label smaller....

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    This one was of the steps that took you to the beach. I will probably make the label smaller.

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    Very nice. Thoughts on this one: It could use a tad more saturation and I would suggest getting rid of the little piece of handrail that cuts across the bottom LH corner.

    Another option with this image may have been to shoot right along the boardwalk, so that you were following it as it climbed the hill. Absolutely nothing wrong with your choice however.

    BTW, where is that? It looks like Dartmouth, out Eastern Passage way...

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    Thank-you for the advice, I didn't even notice that handrail there...lol...yes it is outside of dartmouth, lawrencetown beach actually...lol...I live in Lower Sackville. Are you from around here?
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    Here is the new pic with the handrail cropped out and the saturation higher, what do you think?

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    Okay, I know exactly where that is now. Nope, not a Bluenoser, but I did live in Dartmouth for a few years (late 80s-early 90s) up around Penhorn Mall.

    I like your second version better; now, your next challenge is to learn how to work with layers and do selective adjustments. What would really make this image pop would be to adjust the white in the clouds separately from the blue in the sky. What software are you using?

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    Thats cool that you lived in Dartmouth. I am using Picasa2 and an browser editing software, picnik.com
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    Quote Originally Posted by Nikki2291 View Post
    Thats cool that you lived in Dartmouth. I am using Picasa2 and an browser editing software, picnik.com
    I'd suggest looking at either Photoshop Elements (Photoshop 'lite') or PaintShop Pro; they're both in the $100 - $120 range, and have all the power you will need for a long time to come. Have a look, download some trial versions and see what you think.

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    This is a nice shot. To make it better you could burn in (darken) the sky at top middle to the top right.
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    that 2nd shot looks much better! the tips you'll recieve on this forum will help you SO much - i have really gotten a better eye with these guys' help - that handrail on the bottom will scream out to you in a little while, when you get more in tune with your composition.

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    Thanks guys and yes the people on this forum have helped me alot...I will download a trial version of paintshop and see what I can do with it.
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