Results 1 to 8 of 8

Panoramic Pond....

This is a discussion on Panoramic Pond.... within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Hello All, Would like your thoughts on this panoramic hdr I took this morning....

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Location
    england
    Posts
    63
    My Photos
    Please do NOT edit my photos

    Default Panoramic Pond....

    Hello All,

    Would like your thoughts on this panoramic hdr I took this morning.
    Attached Images Attached Images  


  2. #2
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Location
    england
    Posts
    63
    My Photos
    Please do NOT edit my photos

    Default

    I dont seem to have any comments for this image...? Is it that bad..?
    I have shown it to freinds and family, They all say it great.
    I like it my self...But I wish I had shot it in portrait so that I had all the tree in veiw.

  3. #3
    AntZ's Avatar
    AntZ is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Mar 2009
    Location
    Australia
    Posts
    2,290
    My Photos
    Please feel free to edit my photos
    Critiques
    Critique my photos anywhere in the forum

    Default

    I like it. It is definitely a scene worth capturing. I like the contrast and lighting. The biggest distraction for me is the chopped off tree right in the middle of the frame. I think the chopped tree would work if it was off to the side especially if on the edge of the frame. I would think about cropping the fence (as it leads the eye to nothing in particular) keeping the left part. This would put the chopped tree on the edge of the pic and have a better image over all. Sometimes less is more.

    There is some uneven lighting in the sky that you could probably fix in photoshop.

  4. #4
    scorpio_e's Avatar
    scorpio_e is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Location
    Easton Pa
    Posts
    524
    My Photos
    Please do NOT edit my photos
    Critiques
    Only critique photos posted in the critique forum

    Default

    It has pretty much been said already. The skies need a little photo shop and center tree cropped is a bit of an issue for me to....

    Overall I would say it is well done and a wall hanger
    www.steelcityphotography.com

    My mistake has been seeking new landscapes. I should have been seeking new light.

  5. #5
    Mad Aussie's Avatar
    Mad Aussie is offline Moderator
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Brisbane, Qld, Australia
    Posts
    14,098
    My Photos
    Please ask before editing my photos

    Default

    Sometimes things slip through ... .good on you for speaking up and and 'bumping your thread' so we saw it. I've been working away from home so I've probably missed a lot lately.

    This is a lovely scene. Easy to see why you chose to shoot this.

    I agree with the cropped tree and the sky colour differences.

    I would also clone out the sign on the right as it stands out too much. Looks like something stuck on the screen

    Apart from that the shot is a bit small to really get in and critique anymore than that.

  6. #6
    Iguanasan's Avatar
    Iguanasan is offline Moderator
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Halifax, NS
    Posts
    10,917
    My Photos
    Please feel free to edit my photos
    Critiques
    Critique my photos anywhere in the forum

    Default

    Yeah, I know I've missed a bunch lately myself. Sorry.

    Generally, it's a nice shot and seems to have been a nice location. Other's have hit the highlights in terms of critiques so I can't really add to that, however, here's a tip that seems obvious after you hear it but escaped me until I was told. Next time you plan a panorama turn the camera to portrait mode. (on it's side). You'll get more height out of your panoramas and be less likely to cut off the top of a tree.
    “If you are out there shooting, things will happen for you. If you’re not out there, you’ll only hear about it.” – Jay Maisel
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Feel free to edit my shots ONLY for use on this forum and critique my shots in ANY discussion area.
    Flickr | Blog | Google+

  7. #7
    ericmark is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Location
    North Wales. Near Chester and Wrexham
    Posts
    293
    My Photos
    Please feel free to edit my photos

    Default

    To me the problem with all panorama images is where can you use it? As a result the taller the better to get whole image into a usable format. So I normally hold the camera in portrait mode and take a few more shots to compensate. Photoshop CS4 will let you take in both directions and I have taken a 3 x 4 shot but of course not with the type of shot you have taken. However I have done a 5 x 2 and will admit sometimes photoshop can't work out where to put all the bits and it has failed.

    This brings one to the centre tree and to expand the centre to capture whole tree would likely also bring the whole image to more usable relation between height and length.

    From what I read Photoshop CS5 should get rid of this problem but not sure if on a student licence.

    Sorry I did not reply before I was in middle of exams. I also tried a panorama and I had to use clone stamp to fill in some holes where I had not taken enough images at the sides.

  8. #8
    Marko's Avatar
    Marko is offline Administrator
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    Montreal, QC. Canada
    Posts
    14,870
    My Photos
    Please do NOT edit my photos
    Critiques
    Critique my photos anywhere in the forum

    Default

    I'd love to see this larger. I agree with the critiques here especially the tree crop. Wonderful tones here
    - Please connect with me further
    Photo tours of Montreal - Private photography courses
    - Join the new Photography.ca Facebook page
    - Follow me on Twitter http://twitter.com/markokulik
    - Follow me on Google+ https://plus.google.com/u/0/111159185852360398018/posts
    - Check out the photography podcast


    "You have to milk the cow quite a lot, and get plenty of milk to get a little cheese." Henri Cartier-Bresson from The Decisive Moment.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36