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Stir Fry x 2..............Anybody..?

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    Hello All,
    Firstly I have to say sorry about the spelling in the last post (STRI)

    Anyway, I have got rid of the ORTON effect,Sharpened the image slightly and increased the saturation by 5%.
    I have also increases the stroke to 30px.

    Thanks Iguanasan!

    What do you think now ?
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    The increased border width seems more balanced now, I think it could still be a bit sharper, there is no EXIF but I'm guess this was shot hand held and has suffered a little from camera shake with has robbed it of its tack sharpness?

    I like the water droplets that you can see on some of the pepper, this helps it all look nice and fresh. If you get a chance to re-shoot you could try and spray on some more water, and have a play with some different lighting set-ups, lighting from the side can help bring out more texture.

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    I like this one much more! Makes me hungry!

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    This is much nicer I think. Still feels a little yellow though.

    It would be right at home in a recipe book!!

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    It looks a bit soft to me. Color may be a little off too.
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    Looks a tad soft to me as well but a good shot. I'd like to see something more definitive as the focal point..a Brussel sprout, snow pea, mushroom.
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