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pride 08 boston part 2

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    The top shot - did you clone something out of the top left corner? There's something about it that just seems a little off to me.

    My only other real comment would be that it seems like there's strange cropping/framing in almost all of them.

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    thanks for reply

    whats strange to you

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    Not necessarily strange, I suppose, but a little bit off. Like in the top shot, the cutting in half of the finger in the peace sign; the spot where the second guy's arm is a bit cut off and in the third shot, it just seems to me like the people in the background are a little bit too in focus for background... They're little things that are just a little bit distracting from the shots

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    I was looking at the focus and the face

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