another picture that i took at a bayou
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another picture that i took at a bayou
I like this shot much better than the last one. It has a clear focal point and it's nicely lit.
To make it even better, you'd need to get rid of distractions and guide the viewer's eye a bit more.
Here are some things I might consider
- Darkening the sky a bit more or cropping it out altogether
- getting a bit more detail from the shadow areas and water.
- darkening or cloning out the bright dried leaf at the bottom center right.
Hope that helps,
marko
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