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    I took this picture, and reviewed it. Guess what I noticed? I retook the shot for MA.



    I should have kept it and mailed out to you!
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    Nice! I agree though, getting rid of the stray grass makes a much better shot. Nicely done.
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    JJ ... so ... you can learn

    Actually I like foreground stuff very much, even grass, IF it looks like it was meant to be there so it usually has to be a lot of it, or a large something. In this case I think you did the right thing.

    The 2nd shot also focused on the closer headlight which works better for me too

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    Trying to get my head around what truck this is ... a 70's F100 maybe?

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    Hmm, I'm not sure which shot is better. They are both very interesting. It might be useful to see how it looks with the blade of grass in focus as well.

    Was this taken with a 50mm?
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    definitely better without the grass!
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