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This is a discussion on coastal shooting within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; I didn't crop the birds as much in these as I did in the past. The last shot I just ...

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    I didn't crop the birds as much in these as I did in the past. The last shot I just wanted to get feedback on.
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    I think there is an interesting shot here in #3 but it is just too centered within in the image. A more pleasing shot to the eye would have the boat more to the left and bottom of the photo...IMO.
    I'm thinking the same about the 2 bird shots above.
    A good rule to learn if you are not aware to help with composition is http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rule_of_thirds
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    Yes, I'm aware of the rule of thirds so don't ask me why everything is in the middle. I think with the birds I'm trying to fill the frame and get close ups with the boat I just wasn't thinking.
    Thanks so much for your feedback.

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