I took this with a SLR Sony Alpha K200
wut do u think?
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I took this with a SLR Sony Alpha K200
wut do u think?
Very nice! I like the strong sense of lines in the image, and how it fades to darkness at the bottom. I wonder if cropping a little off the top might strengthen the light on the floor. Someone might complain about underexposure, but I really like it the way it is. Excellent.
This is an interestin' shot. I like the lines and shapes.
It might benefit from a bit of cropping on the right side of the image and the top of the image. Also for me it is a bit too dark maybe 20-25%.
If the title is empty room, imo we should see more of the room. As it is shot now, my eye is pulled outside of the room toward the bright horizon at the center left of the image.
Question - what attracted you to this image? This may sound trite but what story or feeling are you trying to suggest or tell?
thx
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what brought me to take this shot was the sun light shining through the windows, i guess the feeling im trying to express is that light will find its way through darkness.
thanks for your comment.
maurid007
the lines are great; i might crop out a bit from the top if it were my shot but i do like the effect of light and dark
I think a crop at the top would help
other than that I like it alot
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