this picture seems to have some compositionally correct elements but doesn't really capture my attention...
does it yours?
This is a discussion on town dock within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; this picture seems to have some compositionally correct elements but doesn't really capture my attention... does it yours?...
this picture seems to have some compositionally correct elements but doesn't really capture my attention...
does it yours?
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It feels like the bright clouds are stealing my attention and competing with the bench in the foreground.
I might try darkening those clouds and perhaps a crop on the left side.
thx
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