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This is a discussion on Pattern within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Would be interested to hear some feedback on this one. Should I tweak it a bit more in GIMP? Color, ...

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    Would be interested to hear some feedback on this one. Should I tweak it a bit more in GIMP? Color, contrast or crop?
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    I like this the way it is. I might be inclined to crop a bit more of the left hand side just to loose that area in the botton left hand corner

    I'm thinking it a window blind ?
    Nice subject well done.

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    I think this is quite interesting the way it is.
    Just curious did you also take a shot where the top slat in the blind is in sharp focus as the rest goes blurry. That too would be interesting.
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    Hey masp. I like this photo just the way it is. Interesting take on a simple subject. Well done - jimmy

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    Thanks for all the kind comments.

    lhosphotography: Yes, it is a window blind, though I was trying to make it look less like a blind if you know what I mean.

    Marko: I tried to do that, but the AF on my little camera is terrible and the lens is rather soft too. So I figured I might as well just blur it all and reduce the noise as well. However, I'll give it another shot once I get my DSLR.

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    I like this shot, great take on a window blind, I would play with the aperture, and see if more blur gives it something?

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    I always love to see everyday objects like these blinds turned into such an interesting image!

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