Experimental portrait II

[Marko]

I'l probably upload another 1 or 2 from this series.

Any comments?

Thx
Marko

[AcadieLibre]

I do like this one far more than the first, the model looks more natural as well as I prefer the lighting on this one. My only issue is with the right side of the Photo, the shadow around his eye seems dark and his eye just looks odd. It looks as though the eye is rolled up in his head. I like the cropping, very creative.

[Travis]

for me... two ways to make this shot better would be to show the glasses better (i was distracted for a moment trying to figure out what they were)... and the right eye is mostly white without pupil..

I like the toy gun and the pulp fiction feel....

[beetle8]

I love the concept, the light fall off in the face gives it an odd tone.
I'd also like a different angle to help the left eye.