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This is a discussion on frost within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; here is a photo of frost, hope you like it, i am looking for some constructive criticism on this one, ...

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    here is a photo of frost, hope you like it, i am looking for some constructive criticism on this one, thanks.

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    hey P,

    First off it's SO much nicer to embed the actual photo (using a 3rd party link or direct upload of a file that is LESS than 250k) in the post. Other members appreciate that very much. I also saw that you posted this in multiple places. Post many many pictures if you like, but please only post them once. many thanks.

    This shot has excellent composition and is interesting to look at.
    However, it is too soft which for me despite the composition, means I move on to another shot. The shot also looks a bit underexposed to me and it looks noisy.

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    I agree with Marko but I wouldn't chuck it. I might try to turn it into a texture to use on another picture because I love the shape of it.
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    I agree with the above comments but do think you might be able to do something in photshop or similar with this. Maybe using a Light render tool you can concentrate the light on the better bits and use the darker parts as a more purposeful shadow. Not sure if that makes sense unless you've ever used the light render tools.

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