Quote Originally Posted by Travis
oh... I thought this was posted in the show your photo's section...

The Proud look is somewhat lost as the colour of the birds too closely matches the colour of the background. The cropping is generally ineffective and you seemed to have picked up a habit of using unmanicured crab grass as partial background. This is distracting. Try using either manicured grass or long natural grass for your back drops.
On top of the weedwhacker in my camera case that you suggested I will add some semtex to get rid of the background stone and a lithium powered lawnmower for the long grass.

Tegan