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This is a discussion on Darkness within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Within darkness, there is a light. So guys, what do think of this photo? More criticism the better!...

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    Within darkness, there is a light.

    So guys, what do think of this photo? More criticism the better!

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    I see what you were going for, but the actual inclusion of the lamp gives it a normal look rather than a mysterious one...not that you could avoid including the lamp.
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    It's not a bad shot, but it's not that interesting imo, it needs something more. (bugs all around the light, a bird etc)
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    I wonder if you were to have a longer shutter opening time and higher FStop (ie F27 etc.) the lamp would turn more into of a light star and that would make it a bit more interesting light effect here....just a suggestion.
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    Thanks guys.

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