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This is a discussion on Cold Beauty within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; It was a cold one today but very clear skies except just as the sun went down there was some ...

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    It was a cold one today but very clear skies except just as the sun went down there was some cloud and of course lots of exhaust. This is an HDR with a touch of Orton. I think this was worth the frost bitten face.

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    Ooh-la-la! (sorry. not much of a critique, that's just the way I feel about the image)
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    Thanks, BF! I am quite happy with it. The river is exactly green like that with ice floating in it and the water is moving fast.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Barefoot View Post
    Ooh-la-la! (sorry. not much of a critique, that's just the way I feel about the image)
    You feel 'French' about the image

    I like this one JAS.
    For the most part I like the soft touch but I'd prefer your main subject to have some sharpness in it somewhere. In this case I think I'd have more sharpness in the 1st and maybe the 2nd span of the bridge.

    The bridge has a walkway suspended under it? Cool!

    There's a bit of a blue cast across the center of the photo and in a few other spots that I'd be balancing out myself. Mainly where it's on the snow and ice ... I prefer snow and ice to be white usually. There are exceptions of course.

    I can't decide if I like the fence and road and road in there or not. On one hand they give more interest but on the other hand I wonder how more clean the photo might be without them. If you shoot this again you might try a composition without them next time.

    It really is a nice shot as it stands though.

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    Thanks, M.A. actually cars go on that little under bridge. I walked down a steep hill to get to the bike path area, lol. I have a couple I took from the other side and from the top of the hill as well. I will add them in here as well. As well as the processing, I think the evening low light has a tendency to make the snow go blue.

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    Quote Originally Posted by JAS_Photo View Post
    I think the evening low light has a tendency to make the snow go blue.
    So does the HDR process quite often.

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    Lol, did you notice that damn Tower trying to get in on the act? Again

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    Here is one from the other side. Maybe it is too golden? It was sunset so that's my story and I am sticking to it.

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    And this which is not HDR.


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    That tower is like one of them gnomes that turns up in emails to home

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