Took this shot while getting the grill ready.
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Took this shot while getting the grill ready.
Looks more like a bonfire!
I take it you are not a propane person
D'oh! Just realized this was the critique thread.
Hmmm. Hard to critique as it's not my type of shot but I think I would like it better if you either showed more of the main fire or none at all.
Last edited by Iguanasan; 01-16-2010 at 06:11 PM. Reason: Forgot the critique!
now this would allow me to get my marshmallows just the way I like them!!
I like the sparks here. I am with MA that seeing more of the fire would help complete the image. My eye keeps going there wanting to look down. Or an alternative is to cut out the flame all together and crop to just the sparks. If you did the crop it would more abstract but interesting I think.
I hope I don't see it out on the deck tonight though (husband in grilling some steaks)!
Last edited by Bambi; 01-16-2010 at 06:46 PM. Reason: just realized it was in the critique thread
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