This is a discussion on Another Sunset On the Bow River and Another HDR within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; A better day all round. The sunset was better, my photos were sharper. The mountains are peeking through the clouds ...
I like the scene and composition in this one, but I'm not sure that HDR was the medium; I think perhaps this would have been more effectively executed using a couple of stops of G-ND to enhance the sky as well bring out a little more shore detail.
I quite like this indeed; it's moody - has a good lookin sky with some nice contrasty branches, some city and buildings in the bkgd for juxtaposition. Interesting composition. It's working for me!
I do like and agree with T.I. increasing shore detail comment. There's more detail you can bring out in the grass below the trees. I think you could also go a bit lighter in most of the foreground as well. Not too much - maybe 15%-20%..
These are minorish tweaks for me tho - well done!
Hope that helps - Marko
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Last edited by JAS_Photo; 01-13-2010 at 12:28 PM.
Here is a reworking of the photo with the levels pulled up a bit more to show more detail:
I have a little question regarding the histogram when working with the hdr's. If you take the colorcast out of the photo using the eyedropper tool, you always end up with a crazy overworked histogram. So what to do?
Although I like the lightened version on screen, after a test print of both I find the darker one is nicer. Much less blueness to it.
My last edit here, I promise.
I think I prefer this or the very dark one.
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