Looking for feedback

[one_twin]

Hi everyone,

I've started a new series, I have 4 done in the series so far.

Looking for feedback and thoughts.


This is not about actual suicide.
No judgments, no how-to, no right or wrong.
It's a study of self-induced release, relief
and self-reliance.
La petite mort.
By one's own hand.
36 times.
36 suicides.

Visit www.36suicides.com for more.

[Travis]

hi one_twin

I'm in no way certified to comment on the technical aspects of the images. As a viewer they are certainly provocative and interesting. I find myself wishing the Niagara picture was better exposed.

[Marko]

I am only talking technically here - some people may be offended by these, I'm not. As an admin here, if these images showed people how to kill themselves I'd pull the thread...but that's not the case here. These are staged photographs.

So technically, I think these shots are well fairly well done.

In the knife shot I would have preferred to see the light more on the knife and blood than the model's back. That part of the image is just a wee bit too dark IMO.

The bathroom shot, I would have liked to have seen the 'poison' larger in the frame. It's a bit small, so at first glance I thought it was a gun.

But overall I think they are well done provocative images, though they are a bit too small on this site to really 'appreciate' them.

Hope that helps,

marko