Great autumn scene.
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Great autumn scene.
I like this shot - great colour!
For me, I might burn in the 'hazy' background a bit.
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Thanks, Marko - I really do need to utilize dodge/burn more often. Here's a shot:
Now I have to get to work!
Last edited by hodaka; 11-10-2009 at 09:47 PM.
I love that part of the world...Nelson is a great town...I really dig Trail too...Thought of moving there recently actually...they look very similar.
You've captured it well.
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Number 2 was much better. Maybe that bit of fence was distracting me more than I thought. It came back in number 3 and I noticed that I didn't like it either. Still love the beautiful colours and wonderful image otherwise.
Hmm...
Looks like I goofed somewhere. I also noticed that the colors have come out somewhat duller than in the original shot. I have noticed this with PS in the past, and not sure what to do about it. I think it may be when I rotate photos, but not sure - PS seems to dull everything.
OK, I fixed no. 3 - how's that?
This is nice photo but there are a few things that really go opposite with fundamental landscape photography:
1. And the biggest boo-boo... Landscape photography called landscape not just for fun. Panoramic pictures look much better as a they photographed horizontally.
2. There is no focal point. I don't see what is suppose to bring my attention and my eyes looking for the subject and can't find it.
3. The view is too narrow. In ideal situation I would take a lens setting wider, or get a wider lens period. That is why it looks too congested.
4. The picture is very colourful but there is no sky contrast. No body say you have to take a picture with the sky but I would take one with the sky and maybe one with out and compare them. Thanks God we don't have to worry about the film anymore.
5. The time to take a shot. I bet if you would take five pictures from the same spot of the same area in different times of the day, you would be very surprised. You would get 5 different pictures. It easier to wait for the sun to change position, then founding a new shooting spot and most of the time it's impossible. I understand that some times you can't wait for the sun but from your story I understand that this is a photo of your own town and you could of done it.
Go back and try to do this photo again, just remember the rules. Take a local church as a focal point or townhall.
Good luck!
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