This is my second attempt at making this chess table talk. Did I come close?
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This is my second attempt at making this chess table talk. Did I come close?
I saw that table too and thought that it had possibilities. I don't know your earlier attempts (but I will look for it).
I like this photo overall. It makes me think of possibilities. Also there's a serene feel to the picture that promotes contemplation (or I'm feeling philosophical tonight).
the centre is sharp and I like the softer focus for the board far away but I wish the part closest was in focus. Not sure if a boost in contrast might make a bigger impact.
I also wonder if adding a couple chess pieces in the foreground might add a bit of punch. It would also be cool if you could catch some interesting characters playing.
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I like the photo! Though... as a chess player, it's hard for me to view a board from any perspective other than as if I was sitting behind it (ie. 'square on', dark square in the bottom left corner). Nice textures.
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Cool shot Ig.
About the only critique I would offer is that you chose 1/3200th at f3.5 and got a very narrow DOF. I would think a wider DOF might have given this a better 'chess board' feel and seeing that you used 1/3200th it's obvious that you could have selected a higher f-stop to gain more DOF and still had plenty of shutter speed left. This is just my guess from looking at this though. Can't say I'm adament about it
I like the way you shot the chessboard - but I think you should place a chessman as an eyecatcher.
Sure it is a chessboard and not a checkers board?
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Thanks for the feedback. Maybe I'll drag a king or queen with me next time. I thought about having it all in focus but something about the shallow DOF appeals to me.
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