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Capturing some fall color

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    Default Capturing some fall color

    So, it's no secret that I joined this forum mostly to get my photos critiqued in order to improve my work. I think most of my pictures will end up in this area of the forum!



    What say you, all?

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    Great color indeed! Depth of field and your framing definitely enhance all of that!

    I like it

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    Hmmm... I'm actually seeing two different photos here. The first is a tight crop on the small group of leaves in the foreground to elimate the distractions of the softly-focused background, with maybe just some minor brightening/saturation tweaks, and the second is the background itself. Other than the spiderweb running through the middle just below the half-way point, it's got a wonderful abstract, almost painting-like quality to it.

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    Another nice shot here Hodaka.

    For me I think it needs some tweaking in the curves/levels department to make the focused group of leaves pop out just a little more.

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    Nice capture. To me, the background has some highlights which pull my eye away from the nice photo of the leaves. If you could burn/darken those highlights it would be absolutely wonderful.
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    I think you could try some other hour of the day, maybe the golden hour, sunset, for a warmer color

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    Thanks all. I got there just a little late for optimum color, but it was overcast so I thought I'd try it anyways.
    I agree about the background being a little distracting, but when viewed on my 20" iMac from a few feet away (as a print on the wall would be), it looks great - one of my wife's faves. (and the wife acceptability factor means a lot here).
    I may go back to the spot when I have different light.

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