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    1/40s
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    1/125s
    F8
    ISO 100
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    Just an FYI - it is much better to use descriptive titles for the shots. Titles like one more or two more are a bit vague...thanks

    These shots have some problems IMO

    Shot 1 - is well exposed but doesn't seem to have a focal point or center of interest. My eye is not being guided anywhere.

    Shot 2 - shows that your camera sensor is dirty. Again there is a lack of a focal point here IMO. Your other shot of the bird in the tree more...sorry
    is much better IMO - it has a way better flow to it and the bird has a visible form.
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    how do I clean my camera sensor? It was snowing at the time. and yes I see what you mean by the titles. Thanks! Still learning the forum. LOL

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    Hmm I guess it is possible that the falling snow looks like a dirty sensor...If shots right after that one do not show those marks in the same place, it was probably falling snow.

    Every camera is different when it comes to cleaning the sensor. Check your manual to see if yours has a setting. If it does not, when you remove the lens, if you take a plastic or rubber blower and gently blow some air (without touching anything) into the camera's interior - that will also usually do the trick. Definitely check the camera manual though...

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