Wedding Reflection

[tirediron]

I am being critical but on my screen it's definitely a frag too bright.

Now that I'm at home with a 'real' monitor, I'll give you maybe 1/3 stop on her right shoulder and edge of her hair, but it's pretty darn close.

[Mad Aussie]

I'll match your 1/3 stop and go for 1/2 stop in the hair and 1/3 in the dress and hand!

She wants critical ... she's doing an advanced course

[Yisehaq]

Thanks guys, yea the dress is her mom's, and she's not actually a bride, she's 18, a friend of mine

I was wondering the lack of smile on the third photo for a bride.

[Chantelle]

Yea, she's a hard person to get to smile and make it look natural rather than being put on.

[Marko]

I too like the concept in shot 1 but not necessarily the pose.
Like T.I., I would have liked to have seen the reflection tack sharp or much softer.

The shot does seem slightly overexposed in the hair in particular.

For me the very first thing I noticed was the lack of professional wedding make-up. She has noticeable bags under her eyes. Hope that helps - Marko

[jlabel]

Nice picture, the first picture there is a problem there. She haz ANTENNA
The second picture is a bit toooo tight otherwise is great.