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    A subtle HDR? Nice shot. No critique from me other than maybe try to make that dark spot in the sky (top right) a little lighter.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mad Aussie View Post
    A subtle HDR? Nice shot. No critique from me other than maybe try to make that dark spot in the sky (top right) a little lighter.
    YEP it is a HDR. Thanks for the comment
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    Hmmm... not getting much from this one. You've got some good leading lines taking the eye to almost the centre of the image, but there's not much when it gets there. As far as the HDR itself goes, that's well done.

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    Quote Originally Posted by tirediron View Post
    Hmmm... not getting much from this one. You've got some good leading lines taking the eye to almost the centre of the image, but there's not much when it gets there. As far as the HDR itself goes, that's well done.
    Agreed. I was hoping the texture and lines would be all I need. It does fall short.


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    A simple subject isn't always a bad thing

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    NIce hdr..love the lines!
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    I quite like it. the simplicity and the textures are interesting to me.

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    I like it too. It's not singing that loudly yet, but the potential is there. MA's suggestion on lightening the dark cloud is bang on. The sky in general could use some slight brightening. I'd also suggest playing with the contrast (increasing it slightly) in the mountain itself, especially the right side. Hope that helps - Marko
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    Thanks for everyone's comments and suggestion.
    I really do appreciate everyone taking time to critique and comment
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