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This is a discussion on landscape touch ups within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; interesting... I took some inspiration from that and tried to make the grassy area and person have more of a ...

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Mick O\'Tighe landscape touch ups 09-03-2009, 10:42 PM
Iguanasan This is my take on it. I... 09-03-2009, 11:33 PM
Mad Aussie Have you put the before and... 09-03-2009, 11:52 PM
Mick O\'Tighe ah! good catch lol. I had... 09-04-2009, 12:11 AM
Mad Aussie Looks like you fixed before... 09-04-2009, 12:11 AM
Mick O\'Tighe interesting... I took some... 09-04-2009, 12:49 AM
JAS_Photo I really like Mad Aussie's... 09-04-2009, 01:13 AM
Mad Aussie Gotta work tonight so I'm out... 09-04-2009, 01:16 AM
Marko Very interesting.....at first... 09-04-2009, 10:13 AM
tomorrowstreasures Hmm. If Mick's main objective... 09-04-2009, 11:57 AM
Mick O\'Tighe thanks for the feedback!... 09-04-2009, 12:20 PM
tomorrowstreasures :wall-an:My brain does that... 09-04-2009, 12:28 PM
jlabel THe first think you must look... 09-15-2009, 04:34 PM
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    interesting... I took some inspiration from that and tried to make the grassy area and person have more of a 'glow' and seem a bit unreal, and I like the change. I also tried cropping... I like it, but not as much as the full shot, something about the wideness of the sky around the tower I like. Oh, and I don't mind any attempts at editing it you make, in fact I insist and appreciate the effort to help!

    Current version before I hit the sack:
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    I really like Mad Aussie's idea and your interpretation but depending on your taste, you can go the opposite route and make everything supersharp and contrasty which gives the look of an illustration or photo realist painting.
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    Gotta work tonight so I'm out of time myself now but tomorrow I might have another crack with a different crop and technique and see what I can do.

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    Very interesting.....at first glance I wasn't sure the shot was a keeper, but I like the various treatments the members suggested.
    Personally, I think I'm with iggy on this one but I'd likely crop the left side to the tower as opposed to iggy's right crop. The main problem here for me is the tower structure, it's too central imo. The various treatments though, help the shot quite a bit. Hope that helps - Marko
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    Hmm. If Mick's main objective was to lose the lady with the camera - i don't think most of the edits make the cut.
    Mick - you could go and do some cloning, but that would take some serious time to do it right. Cropping is a great idea. The crop for it though, IMO should be a slice out of the middle as a keeper turning the horizontal image into a vertical one...
    I would also use the texture of the bricks as your main focus, not the color of the bricks. just my worth.

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    thanks for the feedback! Something about this I liked when I looked at it, but once I started messing with it I was having a really hard time making into anything I liked... hence my posting it here. I didn't necessarily want to get rid of the camera person (who is actually a dude ), just do SOMETHING over there. Here is my final stab at it before I abandon it... I used the coloring from my last attempt, rotated it slightly to straighten the tower, and then I did some content-aware scaling to put the tower off center, rather than crop... mostly just to mess around with that tool An interesting learning project at the lest. Here it is.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mick O'Tighe View Post
    I didn't necessarily want to get rid of the camera person (who is actually a dude ), just do SOMETHING over there.
    My brain does that all of the time... reading one thing that has a different meaning... that is why it is so scary for me to post things. sigh... anywho

    I cracked up with the dude vs lady thing.

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    Here's my last shot at it ...

    cropped and cloned a bit to remove the human and then because it left the tower a bit too centered for my liking in this shot I made a feature of the sky ...


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    THe first think you must look when touching up a picture is focus, you must chose WHERE to apply the sharp and not just sharpen all the picture, the other thing actually I think you make it first, check out for chromatic, barrel and aspheric aberrations correct that first with lens correction or other tool since it will affect the picture overrall. Specially important if you are using a kit lens.
    THis picture of yours seems a bit over interpolated I dont know if its a camera issue or you did it on purpose, but study the best sharpen radius for your camera

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