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This is a discussion on Red Building/White Door within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; This is my original photo. I like the simple geometric shapes and the green trees reflected in the upper window ...

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    This is my original photo. I like the simple geometric shapes and the green trees reflected in the upper window of the alley view of this building.



    But, I think maybe there is a stronger picture in there:


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    The first one is awesome!

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    Love the first one..the second is fine as well but doesn't shine with the colors like the first!
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    I couldn't decide betwenn both. The first has the greater colour - the second shows the stair's pattern better.

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    They're both nice images, but I prefer the colors in the second one and the way the diagonal of the stairwell leaves the frame in the top right corner. I'd like to see it shot at dusk or just as the light over the door is on with a slight underexposure.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Barefoot View Post
    They're both nice images, but I prefer the colors in the second one and the way the diagonal of the stairwell leaves the frame in the top right corner. I'd like to see it shot at dusk or just as the light over the door is on with a slight underexposure.
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    great input from all! me? i really like the top one as i love red!

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