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A fly over the lake Awassa

This is a discussion on A fly over the lake Awassa within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; I trying bird photography these days and I will be uploading some more. Your usual C & C is awaited...

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    I trying bird photography these days and I will be uploading some more. Your usual C & C is awaited
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    I like it. The background is completely overexposed, but I thing it works well here. You would improve the photo if you cropped some of the left side and added space to the right of the bird. That way you would give the bird "room to fly".

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    joaoandreqff got it exactly right. Very nice image; you have some awesome wildlife opportunities.

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    i really like the color of the background, totally unexpected!

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    Thank you joaoandreqff, tirediron, tomorrowstreasures for your valuable inputs.


    Quote Originally Posted by joaoandreqff View Post
    You would improve the photo if you cropped some of the left side and added space to the right of the bird. That way you would give the bird "room to fly".
    Does this improve it?


    Quote Originally Posted by tirediron View Post
    you have some awesome wildlife opportunities.
    yes we have quite a bit around here. I will upload some more wildlife next time.
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    your edit is much better as far as the comp goes!

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    Totally love #2!
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    I think it's great now!

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    Thank you all. Your comment really helped

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    Yep #2 for sure. Great capture.

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