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Not another flower !!!!

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    This one was calling me

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    The exposure and the colors are great, but the background is really distracting. You should have used am even lager apperture and, perhaps more effectively, a lower point of view.

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    Hmmm... I think the DoF is fine, but I would suggest a tighter crop on the flower-bloom. As mentioned above, there is a lot of distraction in the image.

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    love the color palatte! the bee is a bit blurry.

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    Scorpio, I think its a good image. I dont really have a problem with it at all. The exposure is clearly perfect. Good choice with the DOF. I think it shows that its one beauty of many. I like the stems leading up to the flower itself.

    Personally I find it good. The bee inside the flower is a completely different image really only possible with a macro lens.

    Good job here.
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