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    Well, if the cow jumped over the moon..... what about the Sun? :-)
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    I very much like this shot nomad! Very interesting. I like that the girl is sharp and her limbs contrast beautifully against the sky. This looks like some advanced off camera flash on the model - nice. My only nit is the green flare. I'd clone that sucker out in a heartbeat.
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    Quote Originally Posted by marko View Post
    I very much like this shot nomad! Very interesting. I like that the girl is sharp and her limbs contrast beautifully against the sky. This looks like some advanced off camera flash on the model - nice. My only nit is the green flare. I'd clone that sucker out in a heartbeat.
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    Yes this was indeed an advanced shot. Not an easy shot to do. I used a 1.2 Meter softbox, a 300Ws studio strobe and a Honda 1000W Generator on the beach. What you don't see is the audience of 17 people standing behind the camera wondering what I was doing and looking at me like I was crazy and doing something illegal. :-)
    Anyway, This shot is my very own version of Joe McNally's Ballerina at the beach. I saw that shot and was so inspired by it, I just had to go out and make my own. I'll work on removing that flare. :-)

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    How about now?
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    Great stuff, Nomad, and yes, much better sans green. I desperately want to learn to use a flash properly . . .
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    Well done!

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    Yes works for me.

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    me too - good clone!
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    Stunning image. Removing the green spot worked well. I can not say anything else except that I am jealous *LOL*


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    I can't really say anything new but I have to jump up and say "Wow!" Great shot!
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