... a real running snail
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... a real running snail
Focal plane is a little too shallow for me here, MM. A bit distracting to have out-of-focus areas both in front of and behind the subject.
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I love the detail in the shell. I don't mind the shallow DOF. Maybe it is some sort of distortion field caused by the speed of this little fellow
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Must have been a really fast shutter speed! Where's the motion blur? :-)
Too cute in a ugly cute way! Love the detail in the shell!
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I also must agree the tail end should be as clear as the rest of the snail. I think a minor change in the angle and you could have used that DOF but right now I am finding the tail just to irritating to look at.
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I'm okay with the shallow dof here, I really like how sharp the snail's body is as well as the defined skin texture.
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Not a fan of the unfocused "tail" either; perhaps just crop it out?
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