This is very well done indeed. Wicked good mood you created!
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This is very well done indeed. Wicked good mood you created!
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"You have to milk the cow quite a lot, and get plenty of milk to get a little cheese." Henri Cartier-Bresson from The Decisive Moment.
First off, I love the composition and the pose. It appears that you put a lot of thought into the story you want to tell with this photo.
The first thing I see in this photo is her arm hair, which kind of distracts me a bit from the mood I think you're trying to create. I would have preferred a little less intense backlight, with less intense foreground lighting, to create an overall darker image. (Also, got to get rid of that tripod leg.)
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My mistake has been seeking new landscapes. I should have been seeking new light.
haha, scary. Only thing I found to be distracting is the blur on the top left hand corner made me feel dizzy.
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