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    This is very well done indeed. Wicked good mood you created!
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    First off, I love the composition and the pose. It appears that you put a lot of thought into the story you want to tell with this photo.

    The first thing I see in this photo is her arm hair, which kind of distracts me a bit from the mood I think you're trying to create. I would have preferred a little less intense backlight, with less intense foreground lighting, to create an overall darker image. (Also, got to get rid of that tripod leg.)
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    Quote Originally Posted by jmayoff View Post
    (Also, got to get rid of that tripod leg.)
    Nice catch !!!!! I missed that for sure . You are the first one to point that out

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    haha, scary. Only thing I found to be distracting is the blur on the top left hand corner made me feel dizzy.

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