My daughter

[jventer]

She was playing model for me for some shoots

[nomad358]

The first one is great! Nice job! Just be careful not to cut off the feet.

[JAS_Photo]

Very cool! The feet thing is something I have to be careful to avoid too.

[MoinMoin]

The first shot is a cool one ;-). But on the second one she looks a bit sad. I smile would be nicer :-).

[tirediron]

It may be just my monitor, but I'm not seeing any detail in the coat in #1. #2 is nicely done, aside from her already noted expression, but I would consider adding an extra speedlight to your lighting arrangment to produce some catchlights, since as-is, her eyes are rather flat and lifeless.

[scorpio_e]

I love the first one. Nice job on the lighting and her pose

[jventer]

Thanks