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This is a discussion on On A Chair within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Here's some photos of Amanda on a white chair, what do you reckon? Photo1: Photo2: Photo3: http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3569/...f942c324_o.jpg...

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    Here's some photos of Amanda on a white chair, what do you reckon?

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    I like the 2nd shot best. The first one appears to be a little out of focus around the eyes.

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    Hmm, looks in focus on my computer

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    Yup agree with MA, eyes are too soft in shot 1. Look at her hands, they are sharper than her eyes.

    Also this is a thin model. You are inadvertently making her look larger by the use of the round char across her belly in that angle.

    Shot 2 is better in this regard as well. Hope that helps - Marko
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    I see now what you mean about the hands being sharper than her eyes. Personally I like the composition of that shot, in my eyes it doesn't make her look larger, but I know she's skinny so that might have something to do with it.

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