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This is a discussion on Columbine within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Found a bunch of these today also. I thought the colours totally worked. Any advice is always most helpful...thanks...

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    Found a bunch of these today also. I thought the colours totally worked. Any advice is always most helpful...thanks
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    I like the colors in the first one, but the composition of the second one makes it the best shot in my eye. Got a little something stuck on one of the petals, though.
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    The first one suffers from lack of sharpness anywhere in the photo but that 2nd one is very nice indeed. The top left of the 2nd shot has a large white that's a tad distracting and BF has mentioned the hair hanging off the petal already. Small things but these are things that strengthen or weaken an image.

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    The only things I'll add is to watch out for your background. IMO, the second photo has a green thing (leaf i would assume) that flows right into it's pistons. I find that distracts just a little bit.

    I try to make sure when I shoot I don't do that..but it is definately harder than saying it!!

    Very nice colors in these.
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    Ha - thank you for the english name of this wonderful fragile flower. I have had a lot this year - we call it "Akelei".

    Your colours are really wonderful - and the others told you already about the lack of sharpness and the background distractions. So I only can say, that I am looking forward your next try :-).

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    I like the second one the best as it is sharper and shows of the flowers detail better. I have these growing in my garden and enjoy photographing them each season.

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    Columbine always reminds me of the song Ripplin' Waters by The Nitty Gritty Dirt Band.

    Blow like a bubble on a windy day
    Start to flutter when I hear you say
    That you feel to good to go away
    And you make me feel fine
    You've made my world a warmer place
    By the sparkle of your diamond face
    On a frayed spot, put a little lace
    And you make me feel fine
    Warm as the mountain sunshine
    On the edge of the snow line
    In a meadow of columbine
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    Quote Originally Posted by Barefoot View Post
    Columbine always reminds me of the song Ripplin' Waters by The Nitty Gritty Dirt Band.

    Blow like a bubble on a windy day
    Start to flutter when I hear you say
    That you feel to good to go away
    And you make me feel fine
    You've made my world a warmer place
    By the sparkle of your diamond face
    On a frayed spot, put a little lace
    And you make me feel fine
    Warm as the mountain sunshine
    On the edge of the snow line
    In a meadow of columbine
    Very nice...thanks for that BF.....think you might have just made my day...except for the older gentleman today who said I was a "lovely lady" when I said thank you for him opening the door for me and after I returned the favour to him.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Barefoot View Post
    Columbine always reminds me of the song Ripplin' Waters by The Nitty Gritty Dirt Band.

    Blow like a bubble on a windy day
    Start to flutter when I hear you say
    That you feel to good to go away
    And you make me feel fine
    You've made my world a warmer place
    By the sparkle of your diamond face
    On a frayed spot, put a little lace
    And you make me feel fine
    Warm as the mountain sunshine
    On the edge of the snow line
    In a meadow of columbine
    You're such a redneck BF

    I didn't mind a few Nitty Gritty DB songs. Years ago

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    Quote Originally Posted by casil403 View Post
    except for the older gentleman today who said I was a "lovely lady" when I said thank you for him opening the door for me and after I returned the favour to him.
    Sounds like you still got it Casil

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