Hello,
Thanks for all the constructive comments on my previous pictures.
I have another one for you to critique.
Have a great day.
This is a discussion on Waterfall within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Hello, Thanks for all the constructive comments on my previous pictures. I have another one for you to critique. Have ...
Hello,
Thanks for all the constructive comments on my previous pictures.
I have another one for you to critique.
Have a great day.
Been staring at this one for a few minutes trying to decide what to say. Basically, it's an ok photo. Quite nice as it is I think.
If I were to try to make this better as it is I'd suggest dodging in the rocks in the shadows in the dark area of the shot a bit.
I'd saturate the colours some more because it seems to lack vibrancy in those greens especially.
If I were to suggest something different for this shot in terms of composition then I'd probably say it appears you've compromised with the 70mm focal length and ended up with not enough rock at the bottom of the falls/photo, but also not enough waterfall itself.
Without seeing what the whole scene actually looks like though I can't be sure you had much choice here.
If you did have choice however, I'd have either shot it in portrait to capture more of the falls and rock OR probably accepted less falls and more rock. That's my view anyhow
MA took the words right out of my mouth!
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MA gives good advice here. Maybe a slower shutter speed would have also helped somewhat.
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