Here's an image I took today of a droplet falling off a patterned rock face, let me know what you think!?
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Here's an image I took today of a droplet falling off a patterned rock face, let me know what you think!?
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Interesting shot.
Firstly though ... water falls straight down unless influenced by something like wind. So, like an horizon of water, it needs to be plumb. In this case ... falling straight down 90 degrees to the horizon. I'd rotate this to make that right.
Did you crop this Chantelle? If so, I'd have had the droplet much higher in the frame leaving room for it to fall and us to see where it's heading.
Cool shot though and nice focus on a small subject.
Ok I re-cropped it, I couldn't crop it any lower than this, once I turned it there wasn't much space below to crop it.
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The second shot is much better. Perhaps a teeny burn on the highlit rock from the middle to the right edge might improve it even more.
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Good critique MA. And the second shot is better!!! I love water drops![]()
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The lighter rock that are blurred below the droplet.
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Ok I burned it a bit, is this better?
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I like it better - hope that helps - Marko
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