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My mistake has been seeking new landscapes. I should have been seeking new light.
Hi scorpio_e
I really like the colour contrasts and the framing here. Nice pose by the model. The red rim light on her face is very close to her left eye and the heavy shadow between her brow and eye obscure her left eye. I find this some what distracting. However this might be caused by reducing the file size for posting.
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Thanks for the comment It is not as bad on the original file but I agree it is a little distracting.
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My mistake has been seeking new landscapes. I should have been seeking new light.
Very nice, scorpio. A lovely model and peeling paint, it doesn’t get much better than that.
I quite like this. I might burn in the column at right though and the extreme red lighting just behind the model's right hand at the left of the image. Hope that helps.
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I like it completely as it is .... except for that over-exposed column as marko mentioned. But ignoring that ... really, really nice shot.
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My mistake has been seeking new landscapes. I should have been seeking new light.
I like the red light in the room. I may want to see more the right hand of the model.
I like this shot, very nicely done with the red lighting. Pity her toe has been cut off though.
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