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This is a discussion on Mood within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Plume of pampas grass Trembling In every wind... Hush, my lonely heart Kyora...

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    Very pretty! Nice colors!
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    I like the Haiku and the colours. Too much sky in this shot for me, I think the image would be stronger with a good crop off the top.
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    Quote Originally Posted by kat View Post
    Very pretty! Nice colors!
    Thank you )

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    Quote Originally Posted by marko View Post
    I like the Haiku and the colours. Too much sky in this shot for me, I think the image would be stronger with a good crop off the top.
    That is possible. I didnt crop it at all but I will think about it, thanks!

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    A square crop might work for this image.
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    Hi Anastasia

    I agree with the others about the crop too. Although you placed your 1/3s nicely visually the photo is out of balance. It appears bottom heavy. I like the subtle colours.

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    Here is coming the crop:



    I'm not sure I like it better; now it looks like a close up of the straws which is not quite what I wanted to make.. oh well

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    Hmmmm I like the square crop better. The comp look much better !!!
    Works for me
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    I like this crop much better. I might also try cropping all the way to the stalks though leaving maybe 1/4 inch.
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