It's very pretty! Looks like a lovely, calm evening.
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It's very pretty! Looks like a lovely, calm evening.
I love the texture of the sky! Was that natural? Im curious! Great shot! I like the reflection of the lights in the water also.
Tough shot to critique indeed Lovin ... nice work.
I think I can only add that I'd have gone the opposite to Marko and zoomed out a bit further to capture more of that sky and more of the light reflections. F18 really caught some nice little star bursts from the lamp posts too. Like that.
I (think) would probably reduce the blue colour a little in the sky and boost the red and yellow up a tad.
On the other hand ... you could just leave it as is![]()
Zooming out more is not an option, because of the rocks that could distract the eye, only getting more of the sky.
Hmm, I'll do a different crop. Let's see.
"I suddenly understood that a photograph could fix eternity in an instant." - Henri Cartier Bresson
The rocks were right at the bottom, and too dark.
"I suddenly understood that a photograph could fix eternity in an instant." - Henri Cartier Bresson
So they'd be a silhouette or shadow perhaps. That could work. So could light painting with a torch if you feel like really stepping out and experimenting
If I paid you a million bucks to include those rocks AND make them work ... you'd find a way![]()
But hey ... adding the rocks could be a crap idea. I wouldn't know ... I can't see them![]()
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