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Sunset at the Pill

This is a discussion on Sunset at the Pill within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; I have not posted anything for a while, I had an enforced break from taking photos for a short time, ...

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    Smile Sunset at the Pill

    I have not posted anything for a while, I had an enforced break from taking photos for a short time, so this is one of my first taken since I started again.

    Had trouble exposing for the bright highlights and shadows, not sure if it has come off. Any comments welcome.
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    I like it. It's to bad that you couldn't have included the sun in the shot.

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    Glad to see you again taffy!
    In terms of this image though...I'm so so on this one. I like it but it's not really grabbing me. Somehow I feel the balance is off, I think it might be all the light on the left edge. Any other thoughts? Hope that helps - Marko
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    I'm with Marko on this one; the extremes of the bright left and very dark right just don't work for me.

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    Going to agree with TI and Marko here. The bright left just isn't working for me, but I actually don't mind the shadows on the right =) And, I also like the comp.
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