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This is a discussion on Time within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; I was playing around with off camera flash. Let me know what you think. (I know should have not taken ...

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    I was playing around with off camera flash.
    Let me know what you think. (I know should have not taken it with the hands over the Company Logo ;-)
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    I think a darker background might have enhanced this more.

    You've used some tungsten light I think from the left side and the off cam flash from the right?
    Warm tungsten versus cold flash and then more warm colour in the background.
    I think this has made the flash look out of place here.

    I quite like the composition to a point but I think I'd have used the TAG to hide the lid of the pocket watch.
    Also I see you've cropped this photo square. I think allowing some negative space in the left of frame might have worked better.

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