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This is a discussion on I Walk Alone within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Hello, once again! The composition here isn't great, but what I would like to know is your opinion on the ...

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    Hello, once again! The composition here isn't great, but what I would like to know is your opinion on the lighting and contrast of this photo. Thank you!


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    I think there is lots of great shades from the white to black - contrast works well for me (except for the man, he's just outright straight black throughout). If I can see details on the sign above him, I think there should be a bit on him too..maybe.
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    The lighting isn't bad in my opinion and overall the contrast looks OK. The black railing at right is too black for my taste though and I might crop the whole thing out.
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    Yes, that really heps! Thanks!

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    i like the B&W color and the contrast looks good overall except the person in the middle. His shirt is a bit too dark and loses all details.

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