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This is a discussion on Conformity within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; A shot from the other day. I'm calling this "Conformity." I can't decide if I like it it or not. ...

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    A shot from the other day. I'm calling this "Conformity." I can't decide if I like it it or not.



    It's part of my ongoing "Impersonal Space" series

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    I like it, but there are multiple non conformances which detract from it a little. There are some lockers without a padlock, and one with a crooked padlock. I would also think about a tighter crop on the left.
    There is also a crop that would leave only the crooked padlock, with all other padlocks in the vertical position.

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    I like it too but I also agree with Antz. My eye went straight to the crooked padlock before the opened door.
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    Sorry, couldn't resist...

    Straightened and perspective-corrected (still not perfect, but closer), and obviously with the bottom row cropped out.
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    Thanks for the great feedback! Very much appreciated!!


    And her's another from the series ("comformity 2). I think this one addresses some of the issues raised with the first one:


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    damn you for being an LA photographer with a 5d mark II!!!!!!!!!


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